You have some mistakes that need to be fixed before this can be approved. First is Sousuke's birthday. He's 31, not 29. For personality, nothing's wrong with it per say but I'd like to know his overall opinion regarding the whole status system regarding Alphas, Betas, and Omegas. Does he just not give it much thought like many others do? Like it isn't of importance to him as he focuses more on the deep connection his has with a person rather than worrying about breeding or something related to that. If his occupation is still working as a teacher, then you need to put which of the schools he works at. Astraea Academy, Seinan Academy, Hakoniwa Academy or Kaibara University. If he's a university graudate, then there's no need to put anything by school. You can put N/A by that. The history itself reflects LH so you're going to have to change a lot of information around to reflect the universe of Enchanting Love. None of the schools mentioned in Sousuke's bio exist here. Therefore, you need to replace them with the schools that the board does have which is stated above. Secondly is talking a bit about the Alpha, Beta, Omega system and how it reflects within Sousuke's family. Since Sousuke is an Alpha, more than likely, his brother would be too. Because of this, a lot of things were expected of them because of that. Not just career wise but partner wise. Since it says originally their parents didn't treat them any differently from each other, this would mean his parents didn't focus too much on the it as many other families do. That and people thinking of him possibly trying to gain favor from teachers during his younger years because he was an Alpha or something. Things like that. So, it's mainly changing a lot of information around and adding in a bit more to fix it up so it's not confusing of a read to other players. Once you make the necessary changes and post letting us know you've done that, we'll check it over and approve it if it looks good.