Author Topic: Cristin Gray (Omega) (Read 261 times)

Cristin Gray · « **on:** October 16, 2020, 12:04:52 am »

BUT I'M A CREEP/ I'M A WEIRDO/ WHAT THE HALL AN I DOING HERE/ I DON'T BELONG HERE

Name: Cristin Gray

Alias: Cris

Date of Birth: September 9th, 2001

Age: 19

Primary Gender: Female

Secondary Gender: Omega

Character's Scent: Pina-Colada

Sexuality: Bisexual

Race: Half Korean, Half American

Species: Human

Hobbies: Reading Manga, Anime, Going to cat cafes, Computers, listening to music

Powers/Abilities:
Hand to hand- Cristin is good at basic hand-to-hand combat that involves the use of her hands though she prefers to use her attackers body weight against them. Thankfully she never had to deal with anything worse than the occasional mugger.

Personality: Cristin is introverted and prefers to let Hanjin do all the talking because social interaction is draining. When you first meet her she’ll be seemingly curt only because let's be honest she's judging to see if you're worth the time and energy to interact with. But if you pass her personal vibe check she's pleasant to be around albeit a tad odd considering her interests and mannerisms. Despite her quietness she has a sharp tongue and will cut you down if you hurt her. Eye for an eye ya know?

Occupation: Co-Ceo and Head Software Engineer of Su Technologies Incorporated

School: N/A

Place of Living: Red Fountain Aparments > O8 > Hanjin Su(her brother stays with her)

Original or Canon: Original

Face Claim: Original(Drawn by me)

Appearance: Cristin stands around 6'0" and thick while slightly built. She has curly brown hair, she dyes blonde and straightens very regularly in protest of her parents. Her typical wardrobe consists of either a cropped turtleneck or halter top that's black or other dark colors, a pair of usually dark skinny jeans, a pair of slip-on shoes and a pair of big round prescription glasses. Though unless she's meeting a suitor then everything is pastel colored dresses galore. Cristin I

History:Born of two beta parents who owned a small business, Cristin is your typical middle class citizen. Her childhood was normal though she excel in science and math which attracted the attention of private schools wanting to push their own reputation further. Her parents first declined but after a bit of pushing and the added bonus of their child's tuition being paid for and the chance to get in with the likes of CEOs and others that could further expand their business they happily accepted.

But everything didn’t go as smoothly as they thought. Cristin being rushed into a new environment shut down socially causing her schoolmates to shun and bully her. Not wanting to upset her parents she internalized her feelings which only caused her to shut down even more. That is until middle school finally came around and one day she finally snapped and went after another girl who was her main attacker. Poor thing thought her daddies money and “power” meant sh!t to Cristin, well the broken nose taught pretty quickly. Cristin of course was sent to the counselors office where she met Hanjin Su. He heard of her for smarts and getting in without paying. They quickly hit it off as they both were in similar situations with Cristin only being there and being expected to achieve to only further others and not herself, while Hanjin came from wealth and was expected to take over his family's legacy.

As they got older the two teens were quickly known as delinquents at their academy. The only reason they weren’t expelled was due in part to Hanjin’s family reputation and Cristin unintentionally falling under their umbrella of protection as well. But this didn't keep Cristin’s parents from trying to marry her off by trying to set her up on dates until she started protesting. Her parents sold this idea that their daughter was this innocent being with natural beauty, so she of course went for the opposite and dyed her hair blonde and straightened it much to their displeasure. But of course this hasn’t stopped them even after she’s graduated and moved out.

Now she works as a software engineer along with being Ceo of Hanjin’s tech company. She likes where she is and can't complain with the money makes, she can shamelessly splurge on memorabilia and things she would either have to sneak when she was with her parents. Aside from dealing with her parents, what's new boo?

SmiTTy · « **Reply #1 on:** October 16, 2020, 07:40:40 am »

Only a few issues here that need to be fixed and you should be set. One is the Magical Arts area. Need a little bit more detail the extent of her magic capabilities so players won't be surprised whenever the character does something different and it's not listed in her bio how she can do it. Even if her magical abilities are a lower capacity compared to the average magic user, if she can do more than what's listed but to an average degree that's not at all dangerous, you can add it. An example of this would be can she summon things, changing things into something else even if on accident, etc. For a magic user this area focuses more on how much mana she has and how much of it she can use to help herself when she needs it. I mean as long as it's not super crazy and such, you're good. That area just needs a bit more.

Face Claim area, since this is your artwork, we'd pretty much list it being under your name as the artist and the character's name. But for here, since you put original artwork, put next to it that you drew it so players and us staff will know that.

The Red Fountain Apartments do have a family apartments section. The apartment you chose are one bedroom for single individuals that don't have an extensive family of more people they're living room. I'm pretty sure Crisin would want her own room to do all her fashion stuff even if she's subjecting her brother into trying on her creations for her, lol. And the family apartments do start from two bedrooms up to four. So for this area it's just changing the apartment letter and number to one of the family ones with more bedrooms for your character and her brother.

This history is fine. If you're planning on eventually registering her brother later on, I'd suggest stating his name in her bio. Plus it also would help to when adding her to the apartment claims list as well. Other than that, these are the only issues. Once you fix those, you'll be good to go.